Agatha Blackmore came into her powers early as a child. Her first spell was a thing of beauty and wonder. It brought terror into the hearts of her family. Who wanted to accidentally become a pink chicken? Now that she’s older her magic is out of control. She needs a teacher and none of the Witch Schools will take her. How about a career in law enforcement? The FBI needs serious help in catching law breaking paranormals. It’s a match made in heaven or is it in hell? God only knows what happens next.
Completely worth it’s 0$ price Well, the price is practically the main good thing about this. It’s also pretty short, so that you will not waste a lot of your time.Â
Story: 5, Editing: 2 The first two offerings in the Federal Witch series by T.S. Paul will likely be the only ones I buy. Despite an admittedly great story with an intriguing, vaguely alternate-history, plot-gimmick, I can’t force myself to wade any further through the extremely poor editing.Â
Decent idea, but no depth. Not a lot of thought to this book, and it has a lot of “telling about stuff,” but not enough showing us.Â